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Shopping Mall or 21st Century Penal Colony.

Mon Aug 10, 2009, 6:31 AM
  • Mood: Artistic
  • Listening to: MUSIC
  • Reading: SCIENCE
  • Watching: NATURE
  • Playing: CELLO KEYBOARD & GUITAR
  • Eating: VEGI
  • Drinking: WATER WINE & BEER
Built in a day
Sand, girders and tin
Prefab shopping mall
For a working class clientele
Everything for sale
With chemist and optician
Open 24/7
All made in heaven.
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Social gathering if you like
Push your food around
Star parade caked music.
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Prefab shopping mall
The Vatican
A pilgrimage every time
The Notre-dame
Walk down towering isles
To marry a barbeque
With blessed burger
You become the pope
In prefab shopping mall.
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Checkout!
A gorgeous honey bun
With e numbered eyes
Or male hunky spunk
Wearing organic hair gel
Loving your food to death
Into recyclable bags
Or do it yourself
With smiley friendly computer scanner
Serving us mega ram lip service.
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However much we pay
Sacred food should stay
You cannot ever leave
Our God blessed sanctified
Prefab shopping mall......

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Psychotic Dream.

Asleep in a symbiotic flotation tank
Head lazily fastened backwards
Four hands playing with my head
Urgently working on something
Tingling the back of my head
I leave my body to observe what.

Two people wear white robes and masks
They work and pass surgical knifes.

Seeing my brain exposed
Soft and urgent looking
Moving like pulsing vulvas.

It makes me hungry
Looking closer seeing
They slowly cut
My brain in half.

Then sit me up vertical
My eyes can’t move
Transfixed on a fish aquarium
Big fish eyes look back at me
They all smile together and say
There you are now all better.

Instantly alone walking
Through a blazing dessert
Hearing a distant rumble
Looking to it, seeing
A cloud of dust gets closer
Four wild rearing horses
Trample over me
Laying me flat on my back
Looking to see
They pull a carriage
With wheels protruding blades
Trying to stand to escape
It runs over me.

Looking again
My body separated
Into severed pieces

Looking again to see
My body gone
Just two eyes
Lay in the sand
My eyes
Somehow blinking
Alone in the sand.

Pressed spread eagled
Back against a towering cliff
Below rocks and roaring sea
Body slowly falls
Towards sharp rocks
Arms pushed out to them
They easily move away
Like floating drifting
Through space
Moving forward
My body through space
Pushing away drifting orbs
Speed hastening
Everything a streaking blur
Falling towards earth
Passing through earth
Laying motionless
In a sparkling void
Breathless breathing out -

Planets emit from my mouth
And circle my head
Trying to laugh
But more planets emit from my mouth
They circle my legs.

Distant people begin to get closer
They all peer at me
Knowing them all
My mother, father and sister dancing
Me trying to join in with them
At the centre of a room
Surrounded by a circle of people
Holding binoculars to their eyes
All looking at me
I ask what they are looking at
They all reply in unison
Your severed brain.

They begin to close in on me
So I dig a hole
Deep down
To some odd shaped wooden door
That won’t open
Scraping hard with fingers
Fingers bleed and bone protrudes
Splintering the door open with bone
Finding it is a coffin lid
And myself inside
I weep hopelessly
Shaking my other body
It crumbles away
Into dust
Where four wild rearing horses
Come pulling a carriage
Side doors open
Staggering in
It speeds me away
With slamming doors
Taking me home
Dropping me onto
A Psychiatrist’s couch.

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:iconsunnidanni:
Hey man, what's been up? I feel like I haven't seen you in ages.

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:iconnawroski:
Soz!! not been on deviant for months. I am fine, my spots have cleared up after stopping eating sweets.
Will hopefully be submitting again soon.
Good to hear from sunnidanni

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:iconsunnidanni:
Hahaha.. No need to apologise mate. It's fine. Hope you're well then.

How can anyone stop eating sweets? Man.. I'd just about die if I couldn't have sweet stuff...

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:iconnawroski:
Dont no why but herbal tablets are my fav, worked out as I can rember Ive eaten aprox 10 kilos worth.

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:iconsunnidanni:
You're kidding! SO MUCH?

No wonder you had to stop... So what are you eating then these days?

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